Length: Novel
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Blurb: Do you believe in love at first sight? Jonathan does: the moment he glimpsed the striking David from afar, he was hooked, but David disappeared before they could meet.
More than three years later, Jonathan gets a second chance—he and David finally meet face to face, and the two fall into a passionate love affair. David turns Jonathan’s previously lonely life into a fairy tale, giving him more than he ever imagined. But the past few years have been hard for Jonathan, and he’s terrified that his young son and scandalous past will be too much for David. If they’re going to build a future together, they’re both going to have to dig deep: David for the courage to share himself in a way he’s never considered… and Jonathan for the strength to tell the truth.
Reviewed by Stacey Jo: This book has a scene near the beginning that I found to be somewhat disturbing that places this book on my dubious consent shelf. I was pretty taken aback at the situation and the way it was handled... simply laughed off. Needless to say, his best friend is a thoroughly unlikable person and nothing was ever done, in my eyes, to redeem her character.
Jonathan then goes on a trip to New York and sees David. He's so in awe of David that he decides to move there to try and find his dream guy. Of course he doesn't run in to him again but he makes a life there. He ends up resorting to some things that he's not at all proud of and later come back to cause him problems. He learns he's a dad and ends up raising his son on his own.
He ends up going back to his hometown where his family lives and while out one night, due to things he did in NY, is harassed by another guy, only to be rescued by none other than David himself. Jonathan ends up going home with David and it's pretty much love at first sight on David's part. We already know Jonathan's been in love with David for the last three years while searching for him. David thinks he's going to keep Jonathan with him but when Jonathan disappears for a few days without any word and no explanation take care of his son and other responsibilities, David's insecurities play on him and he makes the worst of it.
Both men have a lot of insecurities and issues that they have to work through. Jonathan has self-esteem issues and the things he did in his past. David has always been one to leave a trail of broken hearts yet was oblivious to what he was doing. He couldn't seem to find anyone to love until he found Jonathan. Events play out and the three of them, Jonathan, his son, and David all have a sweet happily ever after.
OK, this was a good story, but it didn't blow me away. I really had to suspend my belief on this one and that's not something I usually have too much trouble doing. But to see someone in another state and move there for three years looking for them, only to move back home, only to learn they lived in your hometown all along? And then it's love at first sight for that person when they see you? What are the odds? Situations always felt just "too much". The feeling of the romance just got a bit over the top for me sometimes which pulled me out of the story. I guess what I'm getting at is that they were so desperate for each other in such a short period of time. And this one suffers from an excessive use of "younger/older" references. That annoys me to no end. It got to the point where if I read the word younger or older one more time I thought I might fling my Fire. I did a search once and the word younger was highlighted three times on one screen. It was in EVERY paragraph! I don't understand what compels authors to latch onto a descriptive word and beat it to death but it drives me batty.
If I set aside the things that bothered me: being beat to death with the words younger/older; having to suspend a lot of belief; and what felt like frantic desperation of David and Jonathan for each other, which made it feel over the top at times, it was a sweet story underneath. The guys were likable and any story that adds a child to the mix is always one that pulls at your heart strings.
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